Friday, May 29, 2009

Juniper Again

I haven't really worked on Juniper since last weekend because I've been sick all week but I'm looking over it again and I'm still thinking that I'm going to delete at least 'Snakes II' and rewrite it into the next update. I'd do the same with 'Snakes I' but it's long and it isn't as confusing as the second part of the chapter. I'm gonna re-read it again and then decide.

2 comments:

  1. I didn't think it was confusing I love this story

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  2. Juniper is one of your best story's second only to Role of Seven

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